If you wrote this in jr.high it is very good. the way you explain yourself and let us see what was it the you were hurt or sad about.!! thats good. i'm in 9 grade. well going to it and i write poems too you can search for me and read a few!!!

I am sorry but I thought it was interesting and very good.

O wow---I can't believe you wrote that in jr. high--It's really good and full of emotion! You are very talented-Keep it up! 5/5

Not bad. You're right, it isn't your best, but it is older you say and we all grow with time and so does our abilities.

xDarkSuicidex 4.5

I liked it, it wasnt the best ive read, but it was okay
keep writingxxxx

Although quite simplistic in language and style it is a lovely bittersweet piece. Particularly liked the final stanza - so poignant.