What a powerful poem you have here Sondos. You have used spectacular language to portray a valid message with beautiful depth and picture perfect imagery communicated seemingly effortlessly in your words. Its a political and controversial poem that I found very thought provoking and well written. Kudos to you ;o)

Some of it was hard to read, and the flow wasn't really there, but I really liked it. The metaphors and descriptions in there were amazing, and you got your point across. The meaning and message were wonderful. The structure was unique, and though there weren't much rhyming, it didn't need it. Great Job!

Very creative writing style! Though not my favorite of yours.

This is a really good view on society... A strong poem, though it really didn't flow for me.

xDarkSuicidex 4.5

That was a strong poem!!!! very well written,,, but it didnt flow very well!

but keep it up!

Gr8 thoughts... how do u get such thoughts... i guess u r a specialist in this area... sondos.... u truly have written a gr8 poem which has taught me a new lesson... take care...
needless to say... 5/5