Hey great poem. i really liked it.. probably cause i can relate. keep it up
dee

Wow you are really good, lol i even tried to find something wrong but hence NOTHING! Amazing! 5* you are very talented and have a unique style! LOVED IT!

Wow...i luv it...

Hey great poem i am s ure many people including my self can relate to this. just returning the favour because you commented on my poem and thanks again and well done x

It is also nice

Aww. So sad. =( I know how you feel, yet again lol. Don't worry. You'll get through it, and you'll be glad you did. =) Great write! xoxo 5/5

Samantha

Thats a sad poem! but you really used the bird singinf and the moon which made the poem really good!!!

I really liked this poem. you could really tell how much absence was felt, it was as if i was missing it. really great job, i loved it.
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