Clarissa -
I think this was really sweet. Kind of short, but, sweet. I like how you`ve dedicated it to someone. The rhyming in the first stanza was a little confusing, but the rest of it worked out well. And the flow throughout the poem was perfect. Great job. 5/5

Love much,
Samantha Hollywood

Its nice... i feel your emotion... i too treasure every moment i have with this special someone... it just so happend that things are different now... and we dont speak.. well every moment is precious so treasure it while it lasts... :D love the poem.. keep writing!

~angel~