Great poem, I have one Kinda like it...I can totally relate!!!
"To drying my tears as the fell from my eyes,
What happened to tucking my into bed," shouldnt it be as they fell and tucking me into my bed???

~~Sweetie

This was great...kind of sad..But I loved it...it looks like you really wrote this from the heart...or a very goood idea lol good wriitng once again 5/5

God Bless

-Chris

Oh, I loved this poem!! I think it hit home, I can definately relate!! Very well written!! 5/5
-the second to last stanza, in the 2nd line, did you mean to write
--to drying my tears as THEY fell from my eyes--?

Awwwwwwww.it is a cute poem. great job.

That was so cute, so sweet and quite sad, i loved the imagery and the meaning within the poem, it was very well done
keep writing
and thanks for commenting on my poems, it means alot to me
xxxxxx

Steph --
This was great! The flow and the rhyming was perfect, and it had a really good story to it. Not much to say, it was great. 5/5

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood

This is just so good but sad.
I can relate to this to. But yeah.
Your poems are just amazing.
5/5
If you ever want to talk =D

Kaytie.xx

Sweet poem, but it lacks much sophistication in the writing. However, this gives it an innocence that works well with the theme. Good poem

Wow this is really good!

I didnt liek this one.
It was all over the place.
It had a certain meaning to it which I felt and understood but that was it.
It seemed like it wasnt flowing and it was just a jumble of words.

sorry
but again if it means something to you then thats all that matters.
~Emah

I liked this poem. The way it runs slightly off-track as it were, really brings effectiveness to the poem. As if someone with a shaky hand wrote it, pehaps someone after a fight with a father who dosn't seem to care anymore . . . beautiful poem.

Peace. [Sole]

Wow that kinda made me cry..I can really relate

I can relate to this heaps. I have one kinda like it called 'Dad' but yeah great poem.
~Kyra~

Hey you can't even imagine how much i can connect to this poem i even cryed a little while reading it thank you for this wonderful poem and your words that i am sure come from the heart

That was beautiful. I happen to know the feeling due to the relationship I have with my father. Keep writing you are really good atr it

Wow..that is really good. reminds me of me and my dad. very very good. i love it..your a really good writter..keep up the great work..
xoxo
Kay

Awww my dad asks me that all the time i can relate...great poem