Good googly moogly!! tht ending was a complete surprise!! i liked it!! very mucho!!

This poem really creates the scene in ur mind. nice 1

Godo one..but sumtimes it was weird ot read becasue it didnt match up..but this is your best yet..again separate into paragraphs. much love.

Lissa

This was awsome i cant believe you wrote this it was crazyy but i luv it keep writing because it was awsome

Eh. It's good with.... most of itself, but it seems like poems about disaster, suicide, cutting, raping, etc. are a little too common. Poetry doesn't just have to be sad.

I liked it..it kinda explains how i feel and what i like too do the person i loved he use too be trust worthy but now i couldn't trust him with a 10 foot pole but i'll always love him and cuz we have kids together but it'll always be in the back of my mind about what he done until this day i could care less about my life i still wanna die at times but there is onething that is keeping me going and thats my 3 kids..well just wanted too say that you are a good poem writer and keep it up

That was great. very sad but i liked it.

I loved it good job

That was a very good poem! 5/5 !!!