Oh my god. I remember these days with a deep passion...You captured the thought of a bulimic so well it's amazing. If this is true, you're welcome to talk to me at any time, seriously. Email me. But I loved this, this is one of your best and I believe I've read a few of yours already.

Take Care.

xDarkSuicidex 5/5

Oh my, this was so sad. something i havent had to live with, i am so skinny anyway, but to be honest, its not all good being so small and thin.
the poem was really good and really got the emotions out well, keep writing
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Steph --
This was great! I know you said to not worry about returning the favor, but, that wouldn`t be fair. =D
The rhyming and flow throughout the poem, was perfect. No other way to say it. I`ve read some poems from people who completely mess up the rhyming, which messes up the flow, and it`s so hard to read. But you, did not do that. =D
Much thanks for your comment on my poem, dear! =D
5/5

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood

This poem is beautifully sad, I loved it. I think you described perfectly an eating disorder. It reminded me a little about myself, I share some of those feelings.

I think I can relate to some parts of your poem, especially this line:

I look at myself in hate; this is not what I sought to be,

Great job!

XoXo
Gaby

Aww Steph!! Please don't do this!! I've kinda been there.. I only did it once.. But after it.. It all hurt more knowing that I did that.. If that makese sense..

Anywho.. The poem itself is really good. You expressed so many emotions. It was like a raging waterfall crashing down on me. Excellent job yet again, Keep it up and smile. =) 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Awww.
you shouldnt hate yourself.

It could be worse.
I didnt like the poem much the first one i read about this subject was a lot better.
but still good.
:)
~Emah

Even though i havnt suffered from the trauma i can only imagine the pain and anger of hatered one is only confident if one like their appearence or feel good, well done from helping other girls (and boys) around relate to what you go through people like you deserve alot from life and i think you are an amazing person for standing up and speaking up well done i hope you are on the road to recovery x x x x x x-alex-babe-x x

Not a bad poem. The flow and rhyming was a tad off in places but the images and emotions you portrayed were powerful.
I liked the line "I poke at my stomach, with nothing but sickened thoughts."
On the fourth line where you have "hate" as I read it I thought that might sound and flow better as "hatred."
I think you wrote this well in the sense it was a powerful and a somewhat scary but truthful write. Thanks for sharing.

Wow this is such a well written poem...I mean wow..alot of emiotns and it seems like you nailed it!!! You always write very good poems..your one of the best out there

5/5

God Bless

-Chris

Wow, great emotion in this poem. Eating disorder...great topic

Again its outstanding...
You right sad poems beautifully...
The story behind this is true to many...
5/5...
I look forward to more :D

I am 14 years old and i have bulima. i have had it for 11 months and i haven't had any one understand how i feel until now. your amazing and you helped me to know i'm not the only one.

5/5, best I've ever read. I am anorexic, and it definitly relates to my life. Feel free to im me on msn at Brit73gymnast@hotmail.com

Great poem 5/5