Ur an amazing writer! I love ur way of writing. Keep it up

Such a beautifully written poem.. 5/5 xx

This was a very touching and beautiful poem, You painted such a magnificent picture that was very easy to see. The emotion is there, and the imagery was great. You have done another splended job. congradulations! I only found a few problems that are minor, but it sort of threw the flow off just a little.

In the first stanza last line:

Instead of just a tragic end

I think you could have left the word just out of it because it threw the flow off for me. In the third stanza, last line also there was the word all that you could have left out also because it thew the flow off. There are other minor error's that you might want to look over also. But overall this was a very beautiful piece of art. And this is what I like to see when I read your work. Keep writing these beautiful magnificent pieces and I will keep reading. 5/5

Love
Letty

This was beautiful.
The words, the imagery, the emotion.
It was all there and it was all equisite.
I especially loved the last line.
5/5
*Gem*

I THINK THIS POEM IS JUST BEAUTIFUL. WONDERFUL IMAGERY. I THINK IT HAS A SENSE OF HOPE WITHIN IT. I LOVED IT! 5/5

KELLY
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Very authentically moving and pleasantly visual......

What an amazing poem! Man I wish I could right like you... :( lol

Oh and my song "No Stones" it's classic rock