Wow. is this a true story, its very believeable. One of those cliche things like something you would see on tv.

I liked it alot

OMG Hun is this true?? i's soo sad but it had such meaning, good job!!

Oh my god... its really really good but really sad at the same time
i realy like all of your poems, keep up the good work talk soon
**Em**

OMG! THAT`S SOOOOOOO SAD! OMG! KEEP iT UP!

x3-------SHELBY

Wow. that was amazing. i loved it. i liked how you had them talking back and forth. plus the news headlines. great poem.
miss brittney.

Vary sad poem but good I give u a 5/5

Hery