Awwwwwwww,
too deep.
a great poem that makes you think.
You are really a talented poet that every new poet should look up to.
5/5

Answered all the questions that have puzzled mankind?
Or questioned all the answers that we happened to find?
[I really liked those two lines. They were great.]
This was a really good poem too. I loved how you asked questions in it. I wouldn't change anything in this poem. It's great the way it is. 5/5

Natalie``

..and thanks for your comment.

Wow great work keep it up check out my nature poem

That is very thought provoking, very, very well written

Some good questions. But no answers.
Good job.

Hey I really liked this it was good. Well written.
~Kyra~

Michael, as always, a terrific poem. I love your style, subject matter. the meaning of life, which came first? Only God knows 5/5

Hmm, that was a very good poem indeed. I have never read something quite like that. I believe you wrote it very well. Good job, I will have to read more from you.

-Jennifer.

Overall Rating: 4.8/5

Amazing write! Absolutely flawless! I loved the last stanza, great way to end it. And also the second stanza really stood out to me too.. Great job on this! 5/5 Keep it up!

The cause is the effect and the effect is the cause
Is that the end is the beginning, and the beginning is the end

[I loved these lines soo much]

I really loved this poem... You're extremely intelligent.. And you wrote this so well and it said so much, though it was short.. Great job. Wonderful write - you're a great writer.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5