That was very good, it flowed well, the rhyming was not forced, it was very well written. keep writing and please return the favour if you can
xxxxxxx

Amazing poem. i loved it. you are very talented. i love this poem so much, no matter what the guy did to you, you know how to deal with it and make it better. That's how every girl should be like because it wasn't our fault mostley because our ex's broke up with us. amazing job once again.

keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.
thank you for the comment means the world to me.

Wow that was really good...i hope ill be able to write like that

Hello peanut!!!!
its me ted e!!!
lol jj
thats great!!! lol but i get to read them 1st!!!

The feeling shows there :) i liked it 5/5

Yay u go girl!!! :p

Loved the rhyming in this poem, just amazing =) keep writing
xx

Say|Ruh!
This poem is so cuteeee.
I loved it.

Very nice.

5/5

Take care.

Cas|Sea

GREAT job!!! i love it and i love how the first lines weree always yes and but. it must have taken a long time to do that. so good job!!!

Wow your strong this kinda inspires me to write about something like this nice job!!

The reptition you used really worked in this poem and the words were written concisely and really portrayed the feeling behind the piece well. Excellent job!

~jas~

Wow wow wow, you can just feel the passion burning in your writing, i loved the style of this. You seem so strong, i'm jealous, great poem

~brittany (MD)

This poem is good too except the way it repeats a lot makes it a little boring but thats just my opinion. good job though!

I adore this!!!
My favourite part was the second stanza, it reeally hit me hard.
I thought the flow was good throughout, and I liked how you swapped to oppsisites, I think it gave the poem a lot of power.
Beautifully done!

Love this poem its very nice

Really gooooood poem! =D If you really feel like this, you're a really strong person! Respect =)
xxx

Wow this is realy good, i wish i had felt this way through my last break up. ur very strong to feel this way. even though ur going through a heart ache

Omg i love this poem!
great work x

Yes it was long
but it was well written
yes it had short words
but many feelings were hidden

I lovee it , it makes your sound really strong well donee keep up thee great workk =)
xx