"Exposing my eyes to anew horizon skies"

That's a little confusing. I get what you are saying, but it took my mind a couple of rereads to process it.

But a great write overall Jacklyn. I love the way you've described the set, which what looks like such ease. And there isn't a single fault in the flow. I love the beautiful imagery, and how the whole piece felt so heart-felt. Great work. x