Comments : The Game Called Suicide

  • 17 years ago

    by you come in this world alone in you leav alone

    Good poem well writen i liked this alot i give u a 5/5 stay strong n keep ya head up ~KRISTINA~

  • 17 years ago

    by X~Angie~X

    Wow that is a very strong and deep poem. it has alot of emotion put in it. i like the word choice u used and the flow was pretty good.u have a lot of talent so keep writing. 5/5
    take care
    angie

  • 17 years ago

    by Georgia

    I loved the poem..no exactly what it feels like...yea my poem 'the fall' was true...life just sucks i guess...xoxoxox love georgia

  • 17 years ago

    by Jelz;; Oh,KillMeFast

    Oh how true ..

    My fave part was

    'so why are you trying to make me stop
    when this game keeps me alive
    i love this game that i play
    a game called suicide'

    Although the last line might need another word added to it, caz when you read it .. the last line sort of sutts off .. rather than finishing with the beat ..

    Otherwise .. Love it ..!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    You have so much talent. another 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by lissy

    Hey this poem was awesome it was so true
    PEACE

    *~*LiSsY*~*

  • 17 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    This is another amazing poem!
    i liked it alot...
    you got the talent big time...

  • 16 years ago

    by sophie

    I love this.. your amazing...
    i beleive in you... u have such an amazing talent at writing.

    love sophie x