Hmm, this was a weird format. ABACC
I have never read anything like this before. But I guess any format doesn't really matter. But that was a good read though.

Wow this is really good!

I like how you personified sadness. It's quite a gripping write in such a unique format. Keep it up~Holly

Short / simple and yet so damn deep...thats what i call the art of poetry and u hv it all

all the best and take care
5/5

WOW!

Descriptive!
I love it!

5/5
xx Lolli xx