Really good. 5/5

I think that this poem is lacking... I read your other poem "Dear Cutter" and I think that one had a better flow. This one had a bit shaky flow. The emotion behind it was great, but the way the words were put together seemed a little forced... Like:

"You trapped me in your web
Im still fighting to get free today"

Maybe you should re word the last line. It sounds too choppy... =/ I don't know how else to put it.. Anyway, 4/5 Good job. That was the only line that I thought you should change.

~BJ~

It's so beautiful yet soooo sad. incredible. really. absolutely fantastic

So very relative to my life. i absolutely love it. really fascinating and well written. nicely set out too

Ok, this comment will go for both of the poems. Dear Cutter and Dear Razorblade.

When I read the first one, I was a bit worried, and wondered if your really thought a razorblade would help. Before I wrote a commented, I decided to read the second part. It was a good thing I did, because I learned you know better. I'm glad you do, and I hope you mean what you say. Those two poems are a great inspirational write, and I hope 'cutter' will read it and learn from it. Excellent job!

I find myself constantly coming across poems like this one: set in a depressing tone, written in an immature manner, no original message or feelings, and boring to read from any perspective. I also find the same people commenting on poems like this. They leave comments that praise the poem, relate the poem to themselves or their lives in some way, and let you know just how great and fantastic it is.

You must be told that: this poem is nothing original, I (and I am sure all of your commentators, and you as well,) have read poems exactly like this one. Depression is an overwhelming emotion. I am not arguing this, rather, I am telling you that everyone knows how it feels to be depressed. Since every person knows what sadness is, this emotion is most common. Your poem is just another title to add to a list- the list of poems that fail to express anything of interest.

In order to make a statement with poetry, a poet should honestly try to be different. This poem fails to be different in a number of ways. I will not list those ways, but I am sure you are more than capable of pointing them out yourself. I will make one statement on the matter, though. You might be thinking that your poem deserves some kind of recognition for being unique in the only way I see- the fact that no one else had mixed certain words in the way you have, this poem is the first of its kind, verbally speaking, but it does not. Like I have stated already, it is merely just another poem.

As for the commentators, I am having a problem with them. All sorts of poems that do not deserve praise recieve praise. I feel as though the worst of poets are being favored over the poets who use real skill in construcying poems. It is a shame all in its own.

P.S. GREAT POEM!!!

Great job. 5/5
-Kakashi

Ohmigosh!!! I LOVED THIS POEM!!

Dude, awesome flow, and rhyming was pretty rad. 5/5