Wow, this poem is awesome. Wicked. Take Care

This is an awsome poem! you are really really good!!

Wow...there nothin to saybu...wow...

it's writen well u have sum wonderful talent...keep up the great work...

Thats so great, exploring the idea of fate maybe?
Extremely good to read, every part is spot on. x

That poem. should be published. it is insperastional

Great poem! I simply loved it.

xoxoxo Haley

Thank you all for such nice comments. You have no idea how much it means to me! :)

Very good poem. It really made me think keep it up your very talented.

I really enjoyed ur poem it really got to me u have some really wonderful talents

This one is really good to and thnx for the comment but ur name is??

Aww.. that is so sad. it made me cry. But it was beautifully written. Great job on this. 5/5

Wow...this is truly AMAZING!! I'm serious! And I can totally feel your pain...ive lost people who are close to me too and it really is hard to deal with and i know EXACTLY what you mean! Keep your head up...GREAT poem and you have TONS of talent. Keep up the great work! 5/5 :)

Beautiful... this poem is excellent, hope to see many more like this in the future :D

WOW!! I loved this piece!! Great write, hun. Keep it up. & Thanks for the comment. =)

Nice flow.
Great structure.
Stunning.
Emotional.

5/5
xx Lolli xx

THIS WAS A GREAT POEM..and thanks for your comment it was wonderful keep up the GREAT WORK!

I really liked the way u narrated the whole incident, such act really needs lot of skill and i could sense that all the way

all the best and take care
5/5

An amazing poem my friend, good rhyming scheme keep it up...alot of talent and a big 5 for you. thank you for sharing!
Ayesha

Excellent poem 5/5 xx

Wow!!! i like this one.. is it destiny? by the way thanks for the comment...

The story here was said so unique. Everything is put together. Very sad, I hope you don't know anyone who's gone through this. The poem was expressed well. Good stuff. :)