This is a really good poem. I can relate to it because I know how it feels to not be good enough for certain people becuase I can't afford what they wear.

These are the only ideas I have for your title, but they're not super good. I'm sorry about that.

*your true self
*the trend
*It's sad really, how
*the only one who seems to realize

I really liked your poem because I can really understand what you're saying, especially in this stanza. It's so true, this is what's really happening, and it's a shame.

It's sad really, how
All because of their daddy's money ,
these girls get to be the *best*?
to pick whos worth the time of day
and to torment the rest.

Your poem is so well written, and talks about some big issues in society.

Great job!

Thanks for sharing your poem. Keep writing.

XoXo
Gaby

I like your message it is a sad reality.

My little sister is a very unique individual and she gets alot of crap from people at school and stuff. Luckily, she's strong willed enough to not care.
I never really dealt with this when I was in school. I was different but everyone accepted it.
As for a title I'm not sure I can come up with one, titles are hard for me.
It should be something eye catching.
Maybe...

Cloning the Trend
Be the Trend Setter, Not the Trend
Robots, Clones, and Trendsetters

From Abercrombie and Finch to MTV: The Death of Society

That's all I could come up with. Good luck finding a title. Take care and keep it up~Holly

"It's sad really, how
i seem to be the only real person,
the only one who seems to realize
how every trendy b.tch is f.cking fake,
and how M T V is telling everyone stupid lies "

^^ I'm with you there! i love poems going against the media and what they are deadly lies they are feeding the the public.

titles:

if you do it's sad really, don't put the how in the title! in the title that'll sound weird.

A Costly Trend
Believing a Lie
Following the Clone
Losing a Difference

just a few ideas! keep this up!

~Jacklyn

I liked the other one better but ill try and help with your title prob.
~ Evolution
~ The future today
I dunno something like that.
~Emah

I really like your poem ~ what a terrific (and true) message!!! As for a title, I really don't have a suggestion - other then several have already posted some excellent ideas!

Again, I reall did enjoy your poem, and the message!

Great poem, i always find that titles are better when they are simple and relate obviously to the poem so somethign like
'its sad' or
'sad really'
would be quite effective, remember you want it to be short and sweet, giving a taste of the poem so that people read it, rather than very extravagent which often takes the focus off teh actual poem!

neway, the thing i really like about this poem is how it doesnt follow a rigid structure and yet it still flows really well, the repetition of 'its sad really how' is definately a strrong feature of this poem. it really keeps it all together.

-biscuit-

I think this poem is written so nicely with great talent.you have done a wonderful job here, 5/5

Finally, I'm not the only one who goes through the school day tihnking the same sh!t about them. I love this poem. I love it so...

I loved it, and lauren, it is like mine, a bit.
well done, it was really truthful and sad. keep writing
xxxxx