Comments : Model Behavior

  • 17 years ago

    by Lost & Delirious

    This poem's really good, and I think it can have different meanings. It's so well written and you described many things perfectly.

    Though I'm not sure about the whole meaning of your poem. I really liked this part of your poem:

    She follows the behavior
    of the models covering her walls
    She says she follows my example
    Innocent by association

    Great job!

    Thanks for sharing.

    Keep writing.

    XoXo
    Gaby

  • 17 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    I'd like to ask.
    do u listen to linkin park?
    just a question.
    lol
    thanks for entering
    ~Emah

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    Hmm, I see where your poetry goes. Just from reading two of them, and seeing the title of another. You are definitely against the media and it's role in society. I completely agree with you, and I hate how they highlight such low things. Good stuff.

  • 17 years ago

    by Never URs

    I totally understand this poem! you're a great writer! I love your work! keep it up, can you plz comment on mine :) xo