Wow! That's just simply beautiful. I mostly love the SIMPLE part. It's a great work, but the typos (llok and teh) make it a little hard to read, especially since they're all in one area of the poem, but content-wise, it's LOVELY! :)
PV

Good

Lol ive never seen green in the sunset but i live in Washington where its always green and out sunsets are pink and orange and red

That is very well described. I always loved something about sunsets.

What a nice sentiment these lines hold.

"I look around and see a ring of of these colors around the world, it reminds me of how great and beautiful the world can be and of a very pretty face. "

Thanks for reading and commenting my poems....keep writing! Debbie

That is very pretty. i like the way you use imagery. keep it up dude

Love sunsets so i love this poem very well written!
♥Grace♥