Whoever gave you a one was wrong. This is a very good poem. I gave you a 5/5 hunn. I have two brothers too and they use to constantly fight. When they get older, it will stop. It is just a stage that most boys go through. Everything will be alright. Good job hunn.

>black&&blue

I like this poem. It is very well written. keep up the good work! Please check out mine if you get a chance.