Running away will never solve any problems, it will just make them worst. It's hard living on your own. I'm in University right now, and living in an apartment, it'shard, trust me. But I liked the poem, it was really emotional. My advice is, stay at home. You are safest there. The streets are worst. Even if you think your home is a wreck, the streets are far worst. Thanks for the write.

I like this poem. It is very well written. keep up the good work! Please check out mine if you get a chance.

Hey darlin this was a very touchign and sad piece. i think many can relate to this

I somtimes feel like this, too. I think we all do every once in a while. The flow is excellent and it sounds great. Good job hunn. Keep your head held high.

>black&&blue

Yep. I have days like that too lol.
Nice sweet little poem

Aww! Terrific poem! I loved the flow yet again, and it's exactly how I feel most of the time. =) Not exactly what you'd want to happen, but it does lol. Good job, keep it up =) 5/5 xxoo

Samantha