WOW... i just don't know what to say..
it's soo deep, painful, heartbreaking.....
this poem was beautifully written..
5.5

Much love,
Ipsita

That was so deep and well-written! You have made such a great job with this poem that I dont even know what else to say. Im totally speechless, dear. Awesome poem, it really was worth reading! Keep writing...
Best wishes, ( 5/5 )

...TILLmyLASTtearFALLS...

I like this poem. It is very well written. keep up the good work! Please check out mine if you get a chance.

I agree with all of them who commented before me. And they all said the same thing I'm about to say... you're just brilliant!!!

Love&Best Wishes
Michelle

First, I would like 2 thank u 4 keeping in touch thru reading my poems and commenting .2ndly, As u said my poems lately r overlooked and am so sad though i read many other poems and i believe my poems r well-written yet no luck but it's ok i display them in another site where they receive wut they deserve. Now , let me talk about your poem though the same sad mood yet dunno i feel here u r more brave and willing to face these difficulties that r overcoming u and at the same time in some parts u did give up.A good job , dear.
love.

Hey darl some powerful lines. a very touching piece. xx

This is so wonderfully written poem. I loved the whole poem, some of the lines are really superb!

Wow---This is such a deep poem that you put so much emotion in to--The flow is great and your word choice couldn't be better---5/5 keep it up!

Very interestign read this was i havn't read anything like it, good work xox me

BACK INTO DARK POEMS!
good job dear. always loved ur work. keep writing. 5/5

Very touching heartfelt and powerful piece.

Dreams do shatters but a broken heart needs a healing
trying to climb to the next phase of life but again falling
holding the sands of time but the seconds are spilling
fighting my own desires but i am just so tired of killing

i like the words you used.....very well written.....again 5/5....ur very talented....:)

Back in the ring - that's a very poetic way of describing someone who's caught. In a way we all are, aren't we?

well done, Nitin. Hope you are doing okay.

peace
shobhana

Beautiful. A tear rests in my eye, where I feel that I relate to your words all too well. Well done. xx

"there are times when things seems to be so frightening
it seems as if my entire life has been struck by lightning"

God, i can relate to that part! lol
This whole poem is something i can relate to!
You always manage to do that don't you, lol.
And don't worry about trying new styles, it's mostly for competitions when i do, i perfer sticking to my tried and true method as well =)
5/5
*Gem*

What a wonderful yet sad poem. It brought tears to my eyes.
dreams do shatters but a broken heart needs healing
trying to climb to the next phase of life but again falling
holding the sands of time but they keep spilling
fighting my own desires but I am just so tired of killing
What a powerful stanza. The feeling of desire a hard one to fight. Excellent job! Take Care Your Friend Cindy