Wow! I really like this. I like how uv done the rhyme scheme and kept it quite simple. It fits with the theme and doesn't monotonous.

I like this poem. It is very well written. keep up the good work!

I've been going through this over the past 2 years... amazing.

It went unnoticed
you walked on by
my heart was now closed
with tears in my eyes.

^^amazing!!... 5/5.. and thanks for the comments.. i read your profile, and im here if you need any advice, and i hope i can help you...<3

Well done, flawless piece. 5/5, Em