This is a very nicely written poem. I enjoyed it very much

This is really an amazing poem indeed

Distance made my man stone
Our love faded away, and my heart was thrown
He lived in his own mind, while I waited
Soon I realized that love and hate are both related
Teach me the art of breaking one's heart
Close your eyes, the darkness of love is about to start
One by one, all the candles are blown away
And the imperfection of our desires are here to stay...

i swear...i just loved these two stanzas a lot...simply took my breath away...u r too good yaar

all the best and take care

Best things in life comes only when you have the patience to wait for it...But often waiting for the best thing,we lose so many better things in life...I understand ur words..the feelings hidden behind those words...I dont understand why life teaches us things the hard way....Either we must be stupid or the life itself must be stupid....

Magnificent poem... So much emotion... So much of pain... Very well written my friend!

This poem represents my feeling every lines as if knows exactly what am I feeling...This poem is perfectly written. Keep it up