Wow this is really good. I love it. You seem to be a really good writer.
And thanks for the comment on my new poem About her.

That boy isn't worth it. From your poems and the emotion you put into them, you need a boy..no a man, whos mature and treats you like a queen. Not some stuck up brat who doesnt know what he wants. But thats my opinion. Now, I'm gonna go read all your other poems and comment ^^