Comments : You

  • 17 years ago

    by Tina Carr AKA Snickers

    Really good and deep
    i can relate...
    truat me.
    awesome work, keep writing
    ur really good.

    love
    tina
    < 33

  • 17 years ago

    by ♥Who Knew♥

    This Poem Makes me want to cry, Becuase i have went through it hold in there and know theres a light at the end of every road!

  • 17 years ago

    by Heather

    I know how that feels. That was such a great poem. Short, but still great. The flow was really good too. It was also very relatable.
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    I liked the way you threw in the line

    You were" are the key words.

    It really helped to turn the poem around for the ending. Good job.

  • 17 years ago

    by jamie ellen

    A very original style I like it allot very very relatable
    Keep up the good work!!

  • 17 years ago

    by 111308

    Awww! This Is Really Sad! I'm Always here If You Need Someone To Talk To! Just Private Message Me! I Share Like The Same Problems As You We Could Maybe Both Help Eachother Out! 5/5 Fantastic Poem
    Love,
    Steph

  • 17 years ago

    by kelS;

    Oh myy. this poem just makes me sadd but its really good it has a good flow and i like the style alot!