I like it Lisa. it made me happy. I feel like this about a person too. So I can relate. :)

5/5 def.

>black&&blue

Loved it! ..5/5

Short and sweet. I like that. It was very emotional. The flow was very good, but I think the last line seems out of place... maybe try rewording it, or even just omitting it altogether. It would certainly make the ending a lot more strong. A last line of a poem is pretty crucial, so that's why I suggest changing it a bit. Anyway, I like the idea behind this poem. Original and very nice. Overall rating: 4.6/5. Good job. Keep up the good work :)

~BJ~

Awww thats a sweet poem! :D