Amazing poem and I also love the title!

xoxoxo Haley

Wow ben!

Whoa i love it

ps..change your profile so that you can get emails so i can send you a message!

A bleed a river nile
[I'll]
slit my wrist swallow my hate
[I LOVED this line!]

Aw.. This was actually sweet.. and so sad... But a very good write. It kept me reading until the end. Now, the flows a bit rocky, and I HATE how you don't capatilize your 'I's' but it was a really good poem, nonetheless.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Omg! WOW