Comments : Upon A Road

  • 17 years ago

    by limp

    Thankyou :]
    i liked this paragraph ! :

    I have stood upon the world
    crumbling beneath my feet
    I tried to catch the stars
    as they slowly disappeared

    xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by DancingForGod

    I love this poem! So expressive and flowy..(is flowy a word?) idk but it was an awesome poem!