Wow, that was just.. wow. Very descriptive, very addicting, great flow, that was just really good. 5/5

Wow! I can actually say that I am speechless, I can not make this comment long bc all I can say Is wow. you're flow and rhythm was great! you did a perfect job on this! 5/5

I think you used some good vocab in this poem. The flow and rhyming is spot on and it read fluently.
It might just be me not reading properly, but I didn't understand the second line, what's a place of "drain"?
I liked the third stanza very much, gave some great images.
Thanks for sharing.

Very dark , indeed addicting to read,
seriously good poem
keep up with this kind of writing :)

Ooooh that is so wonderful!!! Most good, emma. Most good. Lol
Love ya!!! -Snoo

And blood falls from the rain,

Hope is lost and love can't breathe,

I loved these lines. Very dark and mysterious. It's a great poem and wonderfully written. Excellent job!

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Very dark. Some amazing imagery in here. I love when people aren't afraid to use a great deal amount of imagery and let the reader make their own conclusions. Great stuff.

Very well done. It has great imagery and description. I thought you did and amazing job.

I loved this one.....a lot of intense imagery.....it rocked!!!!!

Whoa... soo deep... so dark... your way with words is just great... keep it up and try to smile once in a while :D

Wow...Not much I can really say here...It flowed really well, emotional, deep...Everything a good poem has lol. 5/5 =) xoox

Samantha

Amazing..flawless flow and rhythm...terrific plot and words were absolutely great...theres no way to pick this apart and criticize it...phenomenal...thx for ur comment
love ya lots,
sore

Holy moly, you have such talent! =0 I simply can not believe that this poem is less than a 5.0 and only has 126 visits. It's unreal. I loved it. 5/5 =]

-Jenna.

Great poem..brings out all the feelings and makes it seem sureal.good job.

Another really good piece. Fantastic in fact! My favorite stanza was the first one, though I'm not sure why I'm afraid, maybe it's the flow. There were a few lines I love, like 'For my yesterdays to last', 'For it's me I shall defeat' and 'I shall see no light of day'. I think I'm a big fan of the word 'shall' in general, because it feels poetic to me.

Brad