Wow...never thought the feelings of loneliness and love could be so beautifully portrayed...truely an amazing write....wish i could write like that someday....take care and keep smiling always...

Bahut achcha likhti ho! Very passionate and emotional poem... Well done!

Wow....this is something that could come directly from heart and touches the same again and again...its really very beautifully written....great poem indeed

all the best and take care

OMG...i have missed reading ur shyari's yaar...5/5..thnx for ur comment...sorry i havnt even been on this site for ages due to exams and my health problems..well nice to read ur poems again..they cheer me up n they inspire me...thankyou...i wil try to keep on touch wit ur new poems too...

luv ya
sonam