Wow what a picture you paint here so vivid yet so true and scary this is a great poem 5/5

Wow i agree with tammi you picture it out so vivid you painted a great piece by this one ill give 5 for this

This one is really good, ur so talented!
keep it up!
this made me think of my dad tho...
he's gin to iraq in february
so.. i could kinda relate.
ugh, EXTRAORDINARY work.

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etina
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5/5

You bring the rifle to life with your description, I hate guns! but loved the poem.