I like this poem it's good

I thought this was a sweet poem, and I like your creativeness for using the repetition and numbers. The only thing I can say is I don't understand what the numbers have to do with anything about love...I mean 'One WHAT is for the times you left me by myself'? Maybe you should add a couple of lines or so to explain this.
I liked the last line, I thought it was a great way to finish. Thanks for sharing.

Very cute. :)

Different and i like it

This is a very unique kind of poem! I really like it and it seems that whenever you try a new type of poem you do an amazing job--It is very sweet and full of emotion-I like the rhyme that you incorporated into parts of it too---Great write-5/5

Honestly it is a really great poem, you did it so great

Great concept. That was really well written, it would probably work better if you kept it at either hryming/non-rhyming rater than to chop and change between the two. Brilliantly penned.

Peace. [Sole]

This is very good.. I loved it. I love the way that you did it, it was very unique and creative. I've never read a poem done that way before. It's a very sweet poem, and I just loved it. I really like the way that you ended it. It seemed to fit perfectly. Great job on this! 5/5 Keep it up!

What a original poem. I loved the use of numbers it was really creative. The whole thing is really cute and sweet.
5/5 for talent/creativity.

A simple idea that works really well, very effective i like it

-biscuit-