Wow i love this poem seriously!
the words flow so well together and i love all the rhyming =]
greatpoem!
5/5
keep writing and stay strong =]
lovelove
Alice
xxxx

Wow.. I'm like the rhyming of Connotation, with desperation!! Well done for that alone, without even mentioning the rest!! Spelling of 'Amongst' if you don't mind me saying, needs correcting.. However, this is very well written, and flows as it would be said, without realising there are rhymes in there. 5/5 for definite.. xx

That was a great poem. it has alot og meaning to it..excellent job!!

Wow, i love this poem.
you wrote it extremely well.
and it flowed nicely.
great work.
:)