Comments : Broken Vows

  • 17 years ago

    by SaveMe?

    Aww sad poem i hope things are okay =]
    great way of expressing yourself =]
    5/5
    stay strong and keep writing
    lovelove
    Alice
    xxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Bethany

    Really great poem.. ou are very talented dont stop writing!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Very amzing and u touch my heart,,u know what i like this line coz i felt hurts...
    I close my eyes,
    It's you, I see,
    With some-one else,
    That's not me!

    im getting hurt great poems keep on writing..