Wow dude great poem i like this alot,

well done, hah i remember when you just joined this sight and first joined my club, and now look, you have come along way, great job,

and thanks for your comments dude,
:-)

Great poem! 5/5

Wow i loved it!!! nice use of words there, and i love the way you used your imagination here! you got the talent write more,,, i am waiting ;)

Keep it up!

This is agreat poem, would like to see more, search the heart they are there somewhere! would like to see what you think of mine.

Wow, great poem! your true feelings and a good choice of words put together to make an awesome piece... very nice! write some more! 5/5

Uh huh. So you're a little star... for real...? Wow. That's just -- silly. Y_Y

(^^,) Okay, I'm kidding! It's a cute love poem. You've, yet again, never failed to express your feelings into tangible words quite articulately. I quite liked it, m'dear. Quite poignant. So, cheers. :)

Debbers xox

Even the smallest light shines in the dark.

Have faith and continue to hope...

GENE!!!!!!!!!!!!! this is kinda really sad!im sry u have 2 feel like that! bout ur forbidden still? well in any case! i love u gene!hehe i wish 2 no star i wish 2 mii angel!k and u can always talk 2 me!