Hey darl this was a very touching poem. very well written. keep it up thank u for ur comment on my poem. meant alot xx

This was really good keep up the good work. 5/5
xoxoxox
Jess

GREAT JOB;; KEEP iT UP!

_______HiS FRiEND*

That was cute, it reminds me of my relationship with my friends. You can really connect with your poem, and it's really nice to hear that other people are having similer stuff going on in there life, you've reasured me that I'm not alone. fantastic job, never stop writing... ;)