OMG! isnt it frustrating when you love someone but they dont know and when youre with them you want to be WITH them. I hate it when that happens! it was good though keep it up!

I know just how you feel when you write this poem, because you see I have a friend who threatend to tell anohter guy that I liked that I loved him. I wanted to be the one to tell him because if he was going to run I wanted him to do it intfront of me. But for now we are dating. So yeah. I really like your poem because I can realte and the story it just had to show that I could understand where the poem was coming from.

Sooo True
Soo true
I love your poem, and your work!
It really is gr8
Well
Keep writing
xx

Dope...
wow...
I love it!!
definit 5/5 ~__^

Awwwwwwwwwww honey!!! this poem is so great!!!! it really made me think about stuff.

well done sweety

x

Wow, great poem, easy to relate to, thats what i love most about poetry

That's a great poem! It read real nicely.. & had a good flow =]
Thanks for your comment =]

5/5
x

Again, great poem

keep writting i loved your poems