Comments : Only A crush

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow, amazing writing. It is a great poem and so deep the way I look at it. It makes you wonder ans try to find out about ppl around you, Am I a person someone may like but i don't know?
    I find this poem so nice and meaningful. great job and a 5/5 for it.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tormented

    But I can't just give up
    He just might be the guy
    But if it turns out he's not
    I'll try not to cry

    ^^Loved those lines!
    Well written!
    5/5
    xx

  • 17 years ago

    by ~TornBecauseOfYou~

    Great job
    Good Rhyme
    GooD message
    just maybe a lil flow trouble..
    dont think im bein mean..lol
    im just tryna help you get to write
    amazing poems, and i know you have the talent, cuz ive seen your freestyles
    and if u keep workin and improvin
    youll get the awards like me

    Great job
    loved it though
    5/5
    ~MF~