Wow. this was short but full of emotion. gr8 work. i really liked this. your vocab was good too:D

Ooo, I like it!! It was very bouncy and the flow was flawless! Keep up the great work! My favorite stanza was:

"A song is sung,
A scream is heard,
The angels cry,
The laughing's absurd."

You are very talented!! Hope that whomever is harassing you and your boyfriend will stop, because that is just wrong. Anyway, good poem. 5/5 :)

~BJ~

Wow short but powerful!! i hope all the harrassing that you and you boyfriend are going through stops.. its not right for someone to do.. but good job 5/5
xxoxoxox
kayla

Short but powerful lines! This was amazing hun. Filled with so much emotion. I also really liked the last stanza. I thought it was great. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

Another awesome poem, keep it up
xxxxxx

Wow, short and simple. That was a great poem. Great use of adjectives. Described everything well.

I thought this was really cool. Kind of odd and unique, whih I especially love. Anyways, I hope to see more of your work soon. :)