I really like this poem. I mean you really describe in detail that you can't live without this guy. Keep up the good work and I hope to read many more poems from you down the road.

Wow, you got some love mm,
ima start commentin your poems on this account, so i can boost up My Comment award, since i already have gold for the other..
Nice poem
Good Rhyme
Nice message
try and put a lil more detail into it
capture the readers mind
make them read the whole thing
and leave em stunned
well good job
5/5
~MF~

Thats soo good!

"I look at you
And angels sing"

I loved that stanza alot :)
Keep it up