Deep poem! I understand very well what you mean with these amazing lines.The rhyming was great too and its emotions were so powerful...I loved it, Keep writing!
Best wishes,

TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

I loved it, i could ralte to what you are saying. keep it up. 5/5

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XxxBROK3NxxX aka ~kristina~

Heyyy, very nice poem =) x