Thats really good van....I love it!

Van! OMFG! Its really REALLy good! Like where the heck did you get the Idea?.. 'nyways Keep on writing, you got lots of talent =)

Van you have pure talent and dont forget it.... I cry at almost all your work and thats not just from a friendly perspective... your an amazing writer... keep true to your work and to yourself true friends understand and even through your writting we learn more about your perseptions and clear gifts... love you hun,
Jessy

HEY!!! I'm sorry it took me sooo long to write a comment! I love it! Especially this line: "Her words spoke no lies", I dunno it's just a really great line! lol Do us all a favor and ENTER THE POETRY CONTEST!!! I love your poems!!! And what have you got to lose by entering? NOTHING! :) Lol. I love ya, love Meg xxxxx P.S. ENTER IT! lol

Write more...
I miss reading your stuff too.
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Wow this is an absolutely amazing poem. I love it and can relate to it.
Great Job!