It's good. (better than mine) thankz for commenting my poems :) we do kinda write different. he he he. lol.

Adrian ('',)

What do you mean your only getting better? your poems are amazing! i love em...i cannot relate to any of your love poems becuz i have never been with the person i love(he lives in the u.k) but yeah your poems are amazing...oh and thank you for the comment on my poem

I think you did a really great job with this one. It was very romantic and had a great feel throughout. And I love the line, "Kiss me sweet, hush my screams." I thought that was beautiful. Keep it up! 5/5
~Jules