Wow this poem is really good im surprised you havnt wrote more your words are collaborative welldone xxxx alex xxx

Really good poem... almost made me cry

This is really good i love it.

Aww this one is ma favorite i really like it its so so idk you are a great writer keep up da good work

Wow, this is such a good poem. i have been reading ur poetry, and it is excellent. keep writing, u have so much potential. =)
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Nice I can Relate to ur peom

Wow...that was great....good job...can relate
Oxo Laura Marie

This poem is tight i like it