Hooray for cinquan! i like the concept that it's "what once was your fire," not just a fire that is happening at the moment. it makes it that much more interesting. and with such a short poem, you don't have much time to get all that interest in there, so cool.

I love it.
And for some reason when I read it..I think of a part from the movie "Memoirs of a Geisha"

Love it! I really like nature poems, and this one didn't let me down =D I love camp fires and this cinquan really captured one, even if it only had 22 syllables---Great write! 5/5

Quite profound for such a short poem. I like it...
Take care and keep it up~Holly

Lovely...something in the poem really evokes memories in me...keep it up... :) you've come a long way in writing...and you're a real POET.

Wow shot but good. painted a picture again. 5/5