I'm rather fond of randomness.

The randomness works it's good, shanik

Hey there!

once again, great write :)
this piece is refreashing, its random and brilliant!

i like how you have taken a freash spin on cutting, the abstract styles break it away from the cliches alot of writers tend to fall into.

well done, and keep it up!

take care,
-hannah

The randomness actually oddlu works so well! i like the way that you've kinda captured it in a different way than other poets.

So random - this is true, but a great tongue twister...

keep it up

october xx