Wonderful poem! I like the repetition of the first stanza at the end. Great job.

xoxoxo Haley

Wow great job keep up the good work ..i loved it ..check some of mine out too

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Love this poem girl, can feel the emotion, nt just wrting for the hell of it, sorry seems like you have had a rugh tym tough. but good poem keep it up 5/5

Wow, thats an amazing poem it's deep i love how u ues ue words in such an angry way 5/5 great job
auna

Hey your poems are really very good. I like them a lot. Please check out my poems and let me know what you think. Thank you.
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