I hope i never grow apart from my best friend!..excellent poem.i gave u a 5*

Wow this is a wake up call to me ..but i love the poem ..check some of mine out too

Great poem but in line 8 didn't you mean that your heart "break"s?

This was a very sad poem, with a deep message. Broken friendships are hard. Keep up the amazing work!
Only think I think you mean Break instead of Brake here.
To this day it makes my heart brake

Aw, this is so sad. It reminds me of a lost friendship of mine so I feel your pain. Everything just fit right, but the flow was a bit rocky. Great job though. 4/5

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