Wow, I love it. This is very nice. Very nice, indeed. Keep up the good work.

I really like your talent, you are a great writer keep up the great job, 5/5

Not my favorite.. its about a 4/5 but i voted five anyway.. the flow is really nice i just couldnt get into it as much as the others

A unique work.. i like the depthness of the poem. And with your chosen words you had portrayed a dark poem with vivid emotions, and successfully maintain those 'til the last line... great job!